I decided to change the topic of my paper and make it about a parent being on drugs and the effect that it will have on the family. Such as the effect in the relationship between husband and wife as well as the kids, along with financial problems. I felt that this topic would have made a better argument than smoking. It's kind of hard to get my point across without being too repetitive. I just can't say parents should never do drugs because of problems like these, over and over again. I find that I can be really redundant and that is what I need to work on.
This week in class we had to do peer reviews, but the peer review sheets were different than what they usually were. I felt that the new peer review sheet is a lot better. It helps to pinpoint what is good about a paper and what is needs work. Although it took a long time it is very beneficial. As I was editing my partner's paper, the review sheet really helped me analyze his paper. There were questions as to how to look at the paper and what to critique. I know that this information will be useful for him and it will also be useful for me so that I can go back and revise mine.
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